Get NZ writing 2019

My object

27 march 2019
Get NZ Writing
My poem was number 17 and my object was a Chinese coin or a good luck coin. We coloured in the  backs  and put them in order. We had to create an anagram. My anagram for good luck coin was cloud cooking. To come up with the words for my poem, I came up with word to describe my object and then I had to write them down on paper.

My poem:
 

The back:

My object

The class poem

review

TROLL REVIEW:
The setting was good they were nice and soft and well organised.
it was cool I really enjoyed it was very educational and fun
it was about the boy getting bulled at school and on line and depression
I would rate it 10 out of 10

GABEZ REVIEW:
The setting was on the floor which sucked and it was crowed and packed.
But it was enjoyable to watch and worth being packed
it was about a guy that had a dream then him waking up and living it all over again
I would rate it 10 out of 10

the post

The Beach

I can feel the soft sand between my toes

I can taste the salt in the air

I can hear the waves Breaking as they come in

I can see the blue sea

I can smell the BBQ sizzling down the road

The Kitchen

I can feel the cake in my mouth

I can taste the chicken through the smell

I can hear the water boiling

I can see my Dad burn himself

I can smell the fresh  of fruit

My Room

I can feel the wind from the fan

I can taste my stash of lollies

I can hear the traffic

I can see my TV

I can Smell my clean laundry

Canoe Polo Court

I can Feel the water splashing against my face

I can taste the sweat dripping down my face

I can hear the sound of the crowd on the sideline

I can see my team working together

I can smell the sizzling BBQ waiting for us to eat