Date
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26th of June 2019
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Topic
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The magic basketball ball touch
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Word count
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101
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My Writing
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I have a thing called the b-ball touch. where when I shot the ball it will always go
in the hoop. I can shoot it the ball from the other end of the court, backwards, blindfolded and it will still go in. one time I was blindfolded with one hand tied behind my back and still got every shot in. then my friend tried and mist every shot. So then I went to try out for the tall blacks and there couch said that I am the youngest NBA player at 11. Then we won the next 9 playoffs. The end |
Hi witana it is nicky and i liked your story but it doesn't make sence from time to time and your writning is stretched out out to the side.
ReplyDeleteoh wait no you fixed it.
ReplyDeleteHi Witana Te Wano here i liked your story, but it does int make sence here and there.
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