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Friday, 26 July 2019

15 minute writing



Date
26th of June 2019
Topic
The magic basketball ball touch
Word count
101
My Writing
I have a thing called the b-ball touch. where when I shot the ball it will always go
in the hoop. I can shoot it the ball from the other end of the court, backwards,
blindfolded and it will still go in. one time I was blindfolded with one hand tied 
behind my back and still got every shot in. then my friend tried and mist every
shot. So then I went to try out for the tall blacks and there couch said that I am
the youngest NBA player at 11. Then we won the next 9 playoffs. The end
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3 comments:

  1. Anonymous26 July 2019 at 10:10

    Hi witana it is nicky and i liked your story but it doesn't make sence from time to time and your writning is stretched out out to the side.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Anonymous26 July 2019 at 10:11

    oh wait no you fixed it.

    ReplyDelete
  3. Anonymous26 July 2019 at 10:16

    Hi Witana Te Wano here i liked your story, but it does int make sence here and there.

    ReplyDelete

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