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Friday, 9 August 2019

paragraphs

this week we have been working on paragraphs and what a paragraph is all about.
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Pavlova is a great dessert to eat. You can put kiwi fruit, strawberries, bananas or even mango on it. Pavlova is better with whipped cream and fruit, anything is better with whipped cream and fruit. I love Pavlova after I eat dinner or just for a treat.

If you don’t like Pavlova  then there is something wrong with you. Pavlova is hard on the outside and sweet on the inside. It is like roasted marshmallow tough outside but a sweet inside. Pavlova is truly the best dessert and if you don’t like Pavlova then your lost not mine.

So in conclusion if you have never had Pavlova before then you truly are missing out on something great and delicious.

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